Story-Telling Unit: Trailer Edit

After some critical feedback on my trailer, I have been notified about the size of my fonts being too small and some clips being confusing and randomly positioned so today I did some more work on it, selecting the font type and size, adjusting the sound and music and sorting out the clips.  I am now 95% satisfied with the final product so next I will look to polish it up and get some more feedback to find out if there are any more critical points to be improved on.